Umbarean Corsairs--wording edit

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Frodo
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The original text of this virtual card read:
"Also, if the Dúnadan’s company moves to Gobel Mírlond, it
may drop off and pick up characters there..."

I was thinking it would be clearer to word it as follows:

“Also, if the Dúnadan’s company moves to Gobel Mírlond, you may reorganize it with your company there (including followers)..."

Is this better? I thought the keyword "organize" would help.

Frodo
Jambo
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Yep, seems fine to me. :)
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